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Open Poetry #25

A Kiss

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-02-19 10:16 PM

A summer's breeze cooling the heat
On my face.
Dandilion wishes beneath pastel rainbows
And the ticklish touch of a hand.
Soothing dreams within my sleep,
Of weeping willows that
Dry their own tears.

Singing birds, which nest outside
My window, singing springtime hymns.
Bluish skies and powder puff clouds,
That shape themselves in loves image.
Sorrowless days and futures bright.
Two as one in lifes exchange,
Join hands in an eternal pact.

All this I find there,
In just her kiss.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-19 11:05 PM

I love the imagery. it is also a very beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

2 posted 2003-02-19 11:08 PM

Thank you loner!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-19 11:52 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Albert, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may springs beauty always bloom in your heart heathered by the warmth of spring, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-20 03:57 AM

powerful!

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

5 posted 2003-02-20 08:41 AM

Thank you all!!!

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