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Desecration
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Desecration |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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The desecration makes me long for new temple One you cannot defile idols wraught in hollow mockery of craft The circle chants of loathesome banalities, cliques and sycophancy Will be death of this [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-19-2003 10:39 PM).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
brilliant....continued... the last line death....almost a contradiction..for the meaning I took from the poem......maybe I was reading wrong....just my view.....  Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thank you again greeneyes, i've changed the last line which hopefully fixes the problem, i'd meant this originally but it felt awkward.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is a poser, it is. And have no answer for ya, Raff. But we seek, eh? Ed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, I don't know exactly what your meaning of this poem is, so I kept deleting what I had typed. It did make me try to figure out what you meant...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what ya been drinkin'? |
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