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Aspens Falling
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Aspens Falling |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Unearthly mist veiling eyes of endless darkness, sculpting winds creating--beauty a soul seeking storms in the distant : tempting images of gold How far then do we round edges Masked blue and green sleeping colors soft-gentle meaningful fate: {through a sea of tangled trees} before red fingers of sunset cascade like velvet rain crossing rivers The awaiting moon reflecting tears {sometimes in the night I dream through amber shadows} {of snowflakes resting in palms of my life -- simple memories, moments} leaves and sky: smudge the hue -- ~ Flow between me the breeze will teach April to fall Take me where the tides start So I can pull you into me [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-19-2003 10:46 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ok.. this one got me..not sure why... but got to tell you it touched me... nicely done and a pleasure to read |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lauren, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as we have so many aspens in Colorado here and I just love seeing them against the sunrise and sunset as the embers of the leaves look like fireflies, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Beautiful  Touching  WONDERFUL WRITING! I loved it!!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sublime wordplay and imagery. While I hate to single them out, these lines, my favourite before red fingers of sunset cascade like velvet rain |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! love the new pic of you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Masked blue and green sleeping colors soft-gentle meaningful fate: {through a sea of tangled trees} before red fingers of sunset cascade like velvet rain crossing rivers The awaiting moon reflecting tears {sometimes in the night I dream through amber shadows} {of snowflakes resting in palms of my life -- simple memories, moments} leaves and sky: smudge the hue -- ~ Flow between me the breeze will teach April to fall ====================================== and I do so love the way your words fall... like stars... this is so lovely Lauren... so delicate...whispers upon the wind. Beautiful poetry..beautiful poet. " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lauren, your beautiful poetry matches your beautiful face! You have a wonderfully unique style of writing and expressing yourself. You are always a pleasure to read! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lauren... how do you outdo yourself?  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady....your words today whisper to my heart...this is so lovely, and so you......and that is a beautiful thing my friend.... |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
If Cummings were female, she would have written like this; from the heart, in a place of softness that only few know. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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