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Always & Never |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
How far had we run from here? You, endurance I, sprinter Only to reach opposite sides of Always & Never For we had always hoped but never really believed... Sunkissed. "I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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GavinKidd Junior Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 44NH |
Those last two lines are great. I liked this! Kidd Keep your plans secret for now. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I like this! Its simple, yet, so complex. But very true, that you must have more than hope, and more than belief, but both. Enjoyed  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There's more going on here than meets the "I". A poignant Tortoise & the Hair sort of scenario... Warm hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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