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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-14 12:42 PM


Don't be a slave
forgive and forget
get out of harms way

Trust is so fake
breathe in
breathe out
resentment and hate

Stop compalining
about their ways
change the fact
tighten your straps
and hold on
for the ride
i'm taking you somehwere
so we can both hide


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-04-15 12:54 PM


Talia:

i'm taking you somehwere
so we can both hide

loved this xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-04-15 02:52 AM


good stuff! enjoyed very much! wonderful ending...makes me want to go with you
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