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A2J
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since 2002-11-22
Posts 43
South Africa

0 posted 2003-04-13 10:39 AM



like a child

lightning flashes
and thunder crashes
raindrops thud
as i splash around in the mud
i'm once more like a child
so untamed and wild
giving in to temptation
not being part of formation

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regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
1 posted 2003-04-13 10:45 AM




Hmmmmm.... the before Him....

And after as well...so easy to get caught up and splash around in the mud produced by a storm.


How wonderful He is so forgiving.

Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat  

  


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (04-13-2003 11:16 AM).]

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-04-13 11:13 AM


Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-04-13 12:46 PM


A2:

this is awesome
you just brought me back there you did
and yes I agree

the confines of conformity
weakens morality . . .
book this please
xxoo

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