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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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nail driven silver spike Breach the flesh within my chest consume my tomb I beg of you resume your deed for me please Deliver me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - Your writing cries out when I read the words. Sad coming from a heart like yours... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This does justice to your title and then some. Methinks your littlewings are tougher than that. You know I admire your intensity, and how you fly so high~ ~Hugs~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Good lord girl! Let's go get a drink. Vivid and yikes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you okay? email me if you want to talk. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy - thank you - yeah - I know my wings are stronger - I am just whining Bill - so very sweet from a true heart as yours Ed - I'll take you up on that offer please Dixie - Yes I am ok - just a write and thank you for your kind invitation - I just may take you up on that as well Thanks guys xxoo -------------------------------------------- I wrote this not in the fashion that I now see as it reads (like a vampire or something) - but moreso like a nail being driven - hence love - into my heart - the tomb - begging love to please deliver me and keep its promise . . . yes I know STOP listening to music while I write . . . |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sue~ Wow...powerful stuff here. Glad to know you're ok, and that it's 'just a write'. Hugs to you, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I'm also glad that this is "just a write" and not the way you're really feeling. I'm glad you're doing okay, too. I also am just an e-mail away, if you ever need to talk. Being alone with our thoughts can get pretty depressing at times. I know. Okay, just wanted you to know that you're not alone here, friend. You are just too sweet and have such a humble heart.That makes people want to reach out to you.  Take care, little one,  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our muses come from many forms... but you could cheer up some of that music! LOL... very good, very strong, and potent!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
agh! writing sometimes brings an emtional deliverance, hope this one did  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - a'hhhh, now I understand from what you said. Still, I hope that things are well with you... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow....! Ain't got no other word, so Wow again! Wow, and that I can't imagine that request being denied...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Vicky - thank you - yes just a heartfelt write Ethel - thank you - I may take you up on that as well - but yes is just a write about my heart - nothing dark Sun - thank you - hehehe most times my music is my muse . . . cheering up a bit yes Kacy - still waiting for the deliverance - hehehe thank you Bill - yes I am fine - thank you for caring Rat - how very sweet . . . funny - you would be surprised . . . Thanks guys (note: I am not suicidal) xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-13-2003 12:41 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oh, this hurt to read Loved the force of this btw, sheer impact [This message has been edited by Aenimal (04-13-2003 03:04 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Raph - knew you would appreciate this one . . . xxoo |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sue, I love this! Such power with so few well chosen words. Could also be taken religiously. I like your explanation. Amazing! Enjoyed much, Hugs, Pat  stay well..... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- It has taken me almost 5 minutes to figure out how to intelligently respond to this... and I still can't figure it out. it is absolutely impossible to imagine that this was "just a write" and that there were no personal feelings behind it. As that is the case, then I hereby officially resign from the writer's profession... I'm still going to write, however, I'll stop calling myself a writer. There is no way I can ever get as... hell, I don't know... anywhere near the bar that this write sets. You have just gone way too high. When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Pat - thank you so much - I guess it can be seen like that - everyone is seeing this one differently - but not my intention - I do love other intrepretations though . . . Brad: What you have said up there has made me feel so good - I am truly humbled - but you are most definitely a writer in every sense as we all are - just happened that this one popped out . . . sometimes I do not know where they come from - your words made me smile but please - you are quite amazing yourself. Thank you - the edge I was going for was Love to come and deliver me - like a spike shattering the walls around my heart - so I could fall in love - asking love to please deliver me - this one can be seen in many ways - and yes it is a write - "just" a write - well . . . . Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-15-2003 04:11 PM).] |
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