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A Lover's Lullaby
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A Lover's Lullaby |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Rock me to sleep in the comfort of your whisper hold me close like your long forgotton teddy bear kiss me in the shadow of our memory tell the moon that you love me every night under starry skies for soon the dark clouds will disapear and we finally realize we were only as far as our hearts. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Rock me to sleep in the comfort of your whisper" So provocative....sounds so secure, like a blanket of protection. I love this. Thank you. Susan |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done..the lines Susan picked I think the strongest..but it all is softly romantic and comforting in some ways.. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this is so wonderful, Brad...gave me a nice secure feeling, and that is appreciated right now!! Loved it!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
glad you liked it. This was written awhile ago so I am glad its still good  |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
Great read |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Brad, This is wonderful. Yes, I like what was quoted, too. But my favorite is the last three lines and so true in so many ways. Really enjoyed this, Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Nice poem1 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww simple BEAUTIFUL!! Charisma |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true! |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
I have translated the poem into Chinese here. If you agree, I will post it to some web sites in Chinese, such as: http://www.toppoem.com/list.asp?boardid=15 http://www.likk.com/cgi-bin/forums.cgi?forum=34 http://www.poemlife.com.cn/forum/list.jsp?forumID=6 http://www.liufangdi.com/index_2.asp http://www2.bbsland.com/cgi-bin/tea.cgi Thank you for your good poem. Ò»Ê×°®È˵ÄÒ¡ÀºÇú Ò¡»ÎÎÒÈë˯ ÔÚÄãµÍÓïµÄÊæÊÊÖÐ ½ô½ô±§×ÅÎÒ ÏóÄã¾ÃÎ¥µÄÍæ¾ßÐÜ ÓÚÎÒÃǼÇÒäÓ°×ÓÖÐÎÇÎÒ ÔÚ²¼ÂúÐÇÐǵÄÌì¿ÕÏ ÿÍí¸æËßÔÂÁÁÄã°®ÎÒ ÎªÒõÔƾ¡¿ìÏûʧÎÞ×Ù ¶øÎÒÃÇÖÕÓÚÖªÏþ ÎÒÃǶàÇ×ÃÜ Á½ÐĽôÏàÓµ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...aptly entitled! Indeed it is! Warm hugs, EA |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Hi, Brad, have you read your poem in Chinese. You can go to "View" on your computer first, and then go to "Encoding". You can read it when you select "Chinese Simplified (GB)". |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
go ahead and post it to the foreign langauge sites -Brad Majors [This message has been edited by Darksoul (02-21-2003 11:16 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brad, Good one, enjoyed the read. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
brad...enjoyed this alot...on 12/28/2000 i posted a poem with the same title gonna repost it for you... i do hope you enjoy it. (my take on a lover's lullaby)...helen |
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