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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-04-12 12:00 PM

Do not look for me in the
confines of -
This.

I dissolve at the end of
your gaze.

Look for me...Here.

With your eyes
closed -

I am darkness that you find.

Reach for me...yet not to hold.

I dissolve at the end of
your fingertips.

Reach for me...Here.

I am this close.

Do not listen to my words.

They dissolve at the end of
my tongue.

Only feel my breath...passing warm against
your ear -

I am this close.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-04-12 12:23 PM

Eric~
This is just softly sensual~
Soooooooo much enjoyed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-04-12 04:33 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2003-04-12 04:50 PM

oh so close, but not unreachable......what a wonderful write!!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-04-12 04:58 PM

Eric, now this is something else!! I enjoyed it.

Do you write poetry for your Love? I'll bet
she really likes it. I think I've told you
before, but some of your poetry writing
reminds me of my Love.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-12-2003 05:00 PM).]

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

5 posted 2003-04-12 05:04 PM

Wow! This is so, so loving, so
filled with divine beauty, sublime.
Thank you for the opportunity to read
and feel the essence of your love.

Warmly,
Etain.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-04-12 05:12 PM

Dear Ethel,
I write poetry for my Beloved,
for The Divine,for the Universe,for God, all terms for the same Infinte expression.

I am fortunate...I gaze into the nights sky,
and see The Divine, the Universe smiles through the eyes of a stranger, God calls to me in the whispers of the day,and the Beloved finds me in the touch of my girl friend. All expressions of the Infinite.

Of course we are all so fortunate as well!
It's in every lovely and loving word you write Ethel. It all comes down to love.
Pretty cool huh?
Love,
Eric

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-04-12 07:03 PM

enjoyed

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

8 posted 2003-04-12 08:48 PM

Beautiful.

Sunkissed.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-04-13 11:27 AM

Divinely inspired ....
It all comes down to Love, indeed!
Wonderful writing.
...makes me think of complete Oneness, breathing as One.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-04-13 12:36 PM

Ericc - I would have voted for this one

I love it!

I am this close . . .

amazing write xxoo

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

11 posted 2003-04-13 12:52 PM

Ericc,

You're writing is truly amazing. There is nothing to say except that I do enjoy it!

Keep them coming, you are very talented.

SG

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-04-13 01:11 PM

Dang.....

sigh.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

13 posted 2003-04-13 02:20 PM

Just beautiful.

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