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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Tongue of flames that enveloped leaving blackened soul aftermath You the rubberneck bystander to twisted wreck of flesh and bone I offer no apologies I offered no promise this is all I am Fate not chosen but served swallowed it as air unconsciously orange pylon yellow tape aura warns of twisted wreck of flesh and bone [This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-19-2003 03:39 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
amzing!! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I applaud you, in standing fashion.....amazing.... Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Interesting poem in the essence of it can be applied in other situations. To take it literally I have chased one or two fire engines in my lifetime, but never would even want to see the results of the described. I am a coward, for I'd be afraid I wouldn't or couldn't be able to help or add anything positive to a deadly scene, and might cause more injury. Assuming help had arrived, and it appeared survivors able to take care of selves. So I'd stay away. Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal Interesting write. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I offer no apologies I offered no promise this is all I am Impressive write.....as always. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks loner brad many thanks and the feeling for your work is mutual lauren thanks you for the constant boost of ego thanks pat, i think alot of people are afraid to help nowadays, mostly due to the threat of lawsuit. this was another of my metaphorical flights, sometimes people seem like wrecks and again some people too afraid to help or to see it all through. thanks for the reply thanks Seymour i'd hoped so Jason thanks and your words are a welcome addition here, i like your style |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"this is all I am" |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Interesting write indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"You the rubberneck bystander" smiling wow You always had a way of making me able to type replies with a clenched fist. |
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