Open Poetry #25 |
Chasing Windmills |
dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I believe in Love... the epitome of insanity Expecting the impossible hoping for my myths Whenever I find happiness I wake up alone and insomnia returns awaiting the elusive dream I've experienced Heaven only to find it's not eternal instead a rest stop on my journey through Hell I chase rainbows... I chase windmills... I chase love... Convinced they exist . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sure they exist! Maybe you are so busy chasing them....you have frightened them into hiding. Good write and welcome to the Passions family!! Have fun. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
dreambuilder, firstly Welcome to Passions, it will be good to see more of your work. Secondly love like many other myths will only come when we stop chasing and stand still. A bit like the butterfly that alights when we least expect it. I like your style and your words. write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Expecting the impossible hoping for my myths" yes, 'tis the very stuff that dreams are made of, dreambuilder. WELCOME to Passions! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I title like this one HAS to capture the attention of a "DQ" fan, n'est pas?... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I must agree, I think I will nick-name you DQ...for what treats might lie in store for us on the morrow, Good Sir! Welcome to Passions! Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Nightshade - of course it exists... thats why I continue to chase - lol Kethry - thank you for the compliment & sweet welcome Midnightsun - you got it - exactly Nan - I was wondering who would be first to catch it - I was in the play - excellent memories Sunshine - I bid you good evening my lady, & appreciate your sweet words - A befitting name - DQ Thank you all for such a warm welcome [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-11-2003 09:35 PM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Terrific writing... Thanx4 this enjoyed read2nite PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
unparalleled in a class of literature this original work lies - as unparalleled as your writing does here: I chase rainbows . . I chase windmills . . . I chase Love . . . convinced they exist Nice entrance - Welcome to PIP! (is about time you posted a write) xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
new post *bump* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Been waiting for you to post, these lines: I've experienced Heaven only to find it's not eternal instead a rest stop on my journey through Hell define life, as I've lived it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! A most wonderful first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, DQ...I see we failed to send you the Passions Special Greeting - and I do not like to think we overlooked such a special smile for your face... so, please, check your E-mail for a Passions Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
CocoBaci - ur welcome 2day - lol Littlewing - what a humbling response - thank you for the welcome & btw I'm very impressed with your writing as well, you are very talented & I am honored by your reply.( you bumped me lol u/r awesome) Thank you Aenimal - from one misunderstood soul to another, I love your style - you are in the handful of poets I look for in the room Enchantress - thank you for the warm welcome Sunshine - ahhhh - you are a sweety - I feel welcomed in to this family of gifted poets thank you for the card - DQ . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is an awesome first writing! Thank you so much! I needed this tonight! Wonderfully inspiring! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
dreamer it does exist......... sometimes for 20 years, sometimes for 20 minutes, take it when it comes............. |
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