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Open Poetry #25

Lost but not forgotten

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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0 posted 2003-04-11 11:33 AM

Lost but not forgotten.

See her
  still love
no return

emotion spent
emotion lost

she wanders
     not hands
     not eyes
leaves again.

Heart broke.

[This message has been edited by Marshalzu (04-11-2003 06:35 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-04-11 12:39 PM

Andrew, this one hurts....
there's lots of emotions
felt in it. You did very
good at describing the feeling.
Hugs,
Ethel

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-04-11 01:56 PM

Andrew~
Such tenderly aching thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2003-04-11 03:08 PM

I felt the pain and emptiness in this write Andrew..

believe in what your heart feels...

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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4 posted 2003-04-11 07:02 PM

Now thats kind of funny, the peice with emotion in it gets a single reply and this, the emotionless peice gets three and all about emotion. Heh.

Thanks for the replies

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