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First Morning Light
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First Morning Light |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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There is a time between night and day first morning light that is often gray, my thoughts turn to you so far away a cohesive connect of the dissaray, a vision touches my heart. I know somewhere you are thinking of me I can feel a gentle touch upon memory, a rainbow of colors that I can see the shades of our love, of happily, together no longer apart. It is in this moment of sweet repose still half asleep, not yet arose, my love for you expands, it grows from my heart it gently flows, to reach wherever you are. WhiteRose 04/11/03 [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (04-11-2003 12:54 PM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
It is in this moment of sweet repose still half asleep, not yet arose, my love for you expands, it grows from my heart it gently flows, to reach wherever you are. -------- nicely penned... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ 'I can feel a gentle touch upon memory' Oh ... oh ... how this thought touches this lady's heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
(I believe you have a typo in your title.) A gentle write--tender, poetic and conveys the thoughts and mood one can experience at "First Morning Light". Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Sudhir, Thank you for your very kind words.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Marge, I've done what was intended if it touched someone's heart. That's really very sweet of you to say.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Linda,  I'm so silly. I posted this then went off to the store. Thank you dear lady for pointing out the typo. And I'm so glad that you enjoyed. |
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