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Open Poetry #25

Slate-Gray (20 or less)

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-04-11 09:48 AM

Slate-Gray

shall my
name be
written upon
your heart
before it
appears on
carved stone
sitting in
a granite garden

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-04-11 11:42 AM

OneSlickLady~
Such a touching little piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2003-04-11 12:55 PM

I hope the heart bears the name soon...the granite garden can wait...well done Helen..

believe in what your heart feels...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-04-11 01:07 PM

That depends..... whether that person can see the beauty inside another person when it's expressed in the way this poem does it.

And if they can't, maybe they don't deserve to have your name there....

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