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Open Poetry #25

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-04-10 10:56 PM

Involuntary hope
a muscle memory
of faith severed

Will atrophied
lies upon cold slate
as last breath drags

Eyes close to
last rites read

No room for reverie
in the catacomb

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-04-11 12:47 PM

Always a pleasure in reading your unique brand of verse

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-04-11 12:49 PM

Raph - is good to see you back . . .

this one I really FELT - you are bleeding here, my friend . . . xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-04-11 02:04 AM

I could feel a poetic pillow smothering me here...nice ending stanza!

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

4 posted 2003-04-11 01:13 PM

I do know that cold slate
but memories cease to leave me
even the haunting ones
excellent writing
I know this well

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-04-11 01:21 PM

With your poetry, you push past the parameters of normal perceptions. Glimpses into your world always intrigue this reader.

Love & Light,
EA

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-04-11 01:22 PM

Hi Raphey

It's good to see you here.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-04-11 10:18 PM

Thank you Brad the feeling is mutual

Thanks angel, i'll heal eventually TY

Thanks Dixie wasn't sure it worked

Thanks dreambuilder appreciate the reads and compliments

Thanks Linda not a pretty world is it

Hey Ethel always nice to see youtoo

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