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0 posted 2003-04-10 11:47 AM


Holidays With Hitler.

Sunshine and smiles
     absentee’s
        at this Prisoner of war camp
on the stormy seaside
    
     the buidlings wear
the grey gloom uniform
    of the wehrmacht
  it’s well worn
     but no colour
shows through

     mother and father
   report me
     disown me
I’m cast into ball pools
   and made to sing songs

I sulk out the hours
    miserable
defiant
awaiting
  the weekend
         liberation.


even kittens can kill

© Copyright 2003 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-11 06:13 AM


Hmmm... something makes me wonder if there's not more to this than what is on the surface. Am I right?  *big hugs* the weekend's almost here dude, cheer up.  I'll give this a more indepth reply if you want it later on when I'm not so wired/tired. *BIG HUGS*

Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness

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Thanks for the reply Rhonda
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3 posted 2003-04-11 07:34 PM


Andrew~
I sensed such intense emotion in this write~

A compelling read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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