Open Poetry #25 |
To Cry For Ourselves |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We share this longing. These tears cried in the grip of isolation...merge along the path of our touch. We cry the tears of the other...until finally...they become our own. Then once more...we cry only for ourselves. For there is no one left to cry for - We are the tears of all things. Longing only to remember. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"We are the tears of all things. Longing only to remember." These last wo lines sum it all up Eric... Well done as usual! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I'm in total agreement. enjoyed this. Sunkissed. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc: We cry the tears of the other...until finally...they become our own. that we do my friend - that we do - awesome write . . . xxoo |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
So many tears So many fears Why no smiles? There should be piles... Nice write! Thanks for sharing! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...an ocean of longing... Warm hugs, EA |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
I really liked this. Greater than all knowledge. Sympathetic tears and the wings of a butterfly. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, now, this is comnpassion.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Through shared tears oneness grows. You have indeed a wonderful compassionate heart. Love, Margherita |
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