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Lost in an Anaphora |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
He said soft to she She listened so intently Intently for he. He With wild in blue eyes Rushing through many surprise Wind blown curls that flies Riding through to his reprise. She Watches in daylight Beneath canopy of white Till the time of night When retires out of sight. Thee will always be Being ever from the you You lonely are thee Thee In thou great beauty Feeling the thought will always be In thy memory In your waiting fantasy. Gloom
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very well done... regards, sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I did one of those once for KAL, I believe. It must be on my other computer. *s M |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Nice! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Professor, I so appreciate you taking the time to explain...Unlike ~M~, I seriously doubt I could write like this and that is also why I so appreciate your talent and sharing it here, with us. Thank you, enjoyed, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
He With wild in blue eyes Rushing through many surprise Wind blown curls that flies Riding through to his reprise. She Watches in daylight Beneath canopy of white Till the time of night When retires out of sight ****** enjoyable read, really nice visuals here |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
intriquing format...well done poem Professor.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And here, I was taking the word religiously... but after reading your poem... it does seem right, after all... thank you, professor. I shall continue to read, and learn... |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Well written Professor! Never heard of that style, interesting... “Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep.” -Lord Byron |
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