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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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You are Cherished But you knew that Lingering in the back Never saying your mind As you read these words We were almost children Me too old for my years You too beautiful to see I could never have touched you Times had changed Yet changed they had not You were still beautiful And I was still unworthy And between them both We somehow met along the way Only to have it ruined By my ignorance and pride So for now I content myself To send you a pleasant dream When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this one saddens me - can relate to that long ago innocence - lost - regret - for other times - but here - you seem so sad - like you are saying sorry for something that maybe just wasnt meant to be ( I have no idea where this is coming from is what I feel) another amazing write xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very poingnant. Eric |
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eeyorrm New Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 1 |
Sometimes it's the case, more often than not, dreams come true. It's being ready for what dreams may come that is the challenge, and certainly the rub. A pleasant dream is a gift. Your words are beautiful, and touched me. Thank you, Diane |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Ringo... for taking me back to a moment when "Cherish" played... and I was young. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
definitely brings back memories... good job Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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