Open Poetry #25 |
ENDED DAYS |
LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
ENDED DAYS I slowly walk through the pathways seeing the cold and countless markers of one's ended days It's a flood of names i won't remember until i reach one too cold to forget the end came too soon for he lived just 19 years I feel alone and empty fighting back my tears For this stone is different from the others because it belongs to my brother Yet this stone is just a marker too cold to convey just how special he was in every way i wipe away my tears and head back through the pathways of a loved one's too soonly ended days. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is the first of your writings that I have had the pleasure to have seen. Welcome to Passions!!! I definately think we are going to enjoy your talent. Great job. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
LUV_R_GIRL~ A touching sad poem that I hope isn't true. I really enjoy reading your poems and your style of writing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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