Ode to my friend with the tattoos

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Open Poetry #25

Ode to my friend with the tattoos

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2003-04-09 05:13 PM

I found her in a field of green,
within a dream,
she sat between,

the flowers
without names,
unseen,

her face of grace
on silent screen,
where evening showers
moon with beams,

and through this dream,
i met her gaze,
within the iridescent haze,

and now i've seen
her charming ways,

her gift of friendship
till now still amaze,
and breath life to
an ordinary man's malaise
i hope to see her
come one bright sunny day

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-04-09 05:17 PM

Enjoyed this upbeat, uplifting poem.
Apt descriptions, I believe..tho. you left out the spice, but, still captured quite well.

So do I hope so.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

2 posted 2003-04-09 05:23 PM

Pat- Thanks for your reply on this and other postings. I never take offense to any replies negative or otherwise. If you said something critical during one of my first writings, I am sure I deserved it and only learned from it. I truly appreciate yours and other input.
BB

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