Hard Dream - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

edh
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 111

0 posted 2003-04-09 04:49 PM

And it was such a hard dream.
But that hard dream helped me
cover the day I was a fool.
And those dreams deliver tears.
Who knows where?

So I fixed my eyes upon the
battlefield and the more I
conquered the enemy the more
I had to cover the day I
was a fool.

And I covered that day with
salt.  I covered the battlefield
with salt.  And I covered the enemy
on the battlefield with salt.

It was a sweet season I had
been delivering.

Dreams.  They're hard man.
Because you're in there whether
you want to be or not.

And reality.  Who knows?
It gives you a whole lifetime
of days to be a fool.

Days you can be sure you
want to be in.

And days covered with salt.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-04-09 05:24 PM

"Because you're in there whether you want to be or not." Like this...James

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-04-10 12:51 PM

Wow -- this is the first of yours that I remember reading....it will not be the last!

Masterful use of the half-said, but fully meant.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-04-10 01:34 AM

And reality. Who knows?
It gives you a whole lifetime
of days to be a fool.

How true these words are... and how many of us use those days to their fullest??
Great job.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-04-10 10:43 AM

The honesty and wisdom in this causes me to save it...and, few I do....

I love it and could read it ten times and still get this feeling of contentment??? This feels right! Soul touching.

Enjoyed greatly,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

edh
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 111

5 posted 2003-04-10 10:45 AM

You may say I'm a dreamer. But I'm not the only one. I hope some day you'll join us.
And the world will live as one.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.