Open Poetry #25 |
Yesterday's gone and borrowed... |
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Each passing night in moonlit sky she lay's awake with tears that seem to etch a trail upon her cheek of once upon a time of dreams... In quiet tremble a whisper is heard amid the swirl of midnight breeze a desperate plea from her very soul to be, if not for a single moment swept far away from this abandonded place of yesterday's gone and borrowed... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (04-09-2003 01:34 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
of once upon a time of dreams... ~*~ Now Coco...you know I sigh much too loud when I am supposed to be doing other things... this is precious... and a |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~Smiling~ I love your poetry hugs M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite! Simply beautiful! I love this Coco!! ~Sugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ *sighs* Such a pleasure ... always ... to read your lovely poetic thoughts~ You're not here nearly often enough, ya' know ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Wow, Thanks for sharing! Never forget to live your life. [This message has been edited by Krystopher Morris (04-09-2003 02:51 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yesterday may be gone and borrowed but this poetic jewel is going in my library... LOVELY poetess Coco...truly!! and I second that you arent here enough "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetPoetFriends Sunshine, Nakdthoughts, Enchantress, Marge, Krystopher, JM and JamesMichael... sooooo bearry bearry much for taking a peak at this lil rhyme... Your comments2me in your reply touch that special place within my heart... *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Loved the gentle longing in this Coco~ So sweet these tender thoughts from you. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PoetFriends Vandana & Blues.... Thank you2for coming by Ya know your kindness always brings out a smile Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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