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She and I
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She and I |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She and I She wakes me up in the middle of the night. In want of kiss she holds me tight. She holds me tight. She won't let go. Until I kiss her soft and slow. Then she sighs and says, "Thank you hon." I smile, knowing that I'm the lucky one. JamesLee April08 2003 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
gently smiling here... regards, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmmm...I remember |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So incredibly sweeeeeet!  Love & Light, EA |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so sweet, James. Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sudhir, passing shadows, Earth Angel and garysgirl for the nice responses...James |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A wonderfully soft write. Enjoyed this very much. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Aaaaw so soft and sweet! I loved this and it definitly has my vote! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet...sometimes I wonder why it is so many poets seem so warm and loving and considerate, at least in words and yet so many of us come from broken marriages. M |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Very tender - I voted for this one. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely, well crafted and gets my vote. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
And the reader smiles too, for the lucky one. Enjoyed. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thanks for sharing, I'm smiling too! I've been kissed by the write. SG |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ahhhh.....a late night kiss!!!! A very sweet write!!! Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh!!!!!! This is so sweet.... Yeah, I understand how it feels, to not let go til you get that kiss...  This is going into my library, as well!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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