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like a kangaroo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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like a kangaroo the heart beats in exaggerated leaps boundlessly free like a butterfly fluttering, bending the skies putting white clouds to shame by adding sparkles to solar dust and swimming in the mist of the early morning air like a firefly blinking furiously yet without rage lighting mellow lamps in the soul of the night like a lesson of love taught by mother to child cradled in a care-filled pouch closest to the heart like a kangaroo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wow! great write! love the ending! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Excellently expressed , nothing more true blue , than the boundless energy of a hopping kangaroo Hope |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... nicely said my friend... I enjoyed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all very muchly, my dear friends... Regards, Sudhir |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
the first stanza really hooked me. the rest was pleasant, but i kept re-reading the first stanza to savor it. like a kangaroo - a metaphor bursting with life and energy! -majnu |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"like a butterfly fluttering, bending the skies putting white clouds to shame by adding sparkles to solar dust and swimming in the mist of the early morning air"  How beautiful..how wonderfully beautiful!!! So very much enjoyed this today! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words... you sure are looking younger  like your new picture*s M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir,MyFriend~ 'like a lesson of love taught by mother to child cradled in a care-filled pouch closest to the heart' Oh my ! That is just EXACTLY how it seems~ EXACTLY~ *Huglets* for this beautifully written piece~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot my dear friends... and Marge, you have spread a smile here...  regards, sudhir |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Hey! brother Sudhir's got a new pic with no moustache!  fantastic write as usual. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanks Winston... regards, sudhir |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir - you have managed to incorporate freedom, love and the inseperable bond between parent and child all in one eloquent write - amazing you are xxoo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sudhir~ I enjoyed very much. While reading it I forgot that it was about a Kangaroo till the last line...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you both very muchly... regards, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
like a lesson of love taught by mother to child cradled in a care-filled pouch closest to the heart like a kangaroo Love the feel of thhis Sudi hugs you Maree |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Maree, thank you very much... Regards, Sudhir |
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