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A Piece Of My Soul (Haiga)
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A Piece Of My Soul (Haiga) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 [This message has been edited by Mysteria (04-09-2003 04:39 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, I feel the tears. Well done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In the leaving, our tears are left behind.... And time goes by so slowly~ Be well Mysteria~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad, Sharon! I hope you are okay. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just a poem! Thanks for reading it though. I am having fun with graphics tonight and trying to write what I see in them. Thank you so much. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A single teardrop Winsome dwell upon my lid In saying good-bye |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Sharon..the words fit thte picture perfectly. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
salt on the wound, yet somehow healing |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
These are fun - try some! Thanks all. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So sad, yet so beautiful. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You MUST teach me this... silent awe. (and it's not easy to shut me up...) but? you MUST teach me this...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 and sure I will teach you, but you need Photoshop to do it with Karen. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mysteria~ One little teardrop can hold an ocean of feelings. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon.. this is absolutely lovely. Maree |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I am liking these a lot Sharon. Nicely captured! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the words and the graphic really complement each other well..i enjoyed this one a lot... may i ask what's a haiga? how different it is from a haiku/senryu? being curious here  |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i hope all is well! the pic with the poem really made an impact. robin i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, this is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't apply to you now but I know this is common to so many and my heart sends hugs out to them all! (sad sigh) This is very well-presented, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mysteria - you have penned here in so few words what is scattered among these pages of blue Excellent xxoo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Everyone of you are so kind in your lovely comments, and I am absolutely delighted you enjoyed this. Thank you so much. |
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