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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-04-08 05:32 PM

To say those three words
seems only to cheapen
the phrase to
overused greeeting card
sentiment

There are no words
to wrap around my heart
expressing yearnings
it feels for you

It is much more
then words
or even Victorian Romance
for it is a verb
the continuing actions
of a man
enslaved to the very sight
of you

Every thought drifts to you
fondly remembering
past conversations
and anxiously waiting new

you own my heart
my mind and soul
as I have yours
like a delicate flower
resting in the palm
of my hand

So when I say
those three words
Its only a mere shadow
of what I feel
and as real as the moment
the fateful day
your luscious lips touched mine
now since that day
nothing will ever
be the same

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

1 posted 2003-04-08 05:36 PM

wow, now if one were to attempt a definition of 'those three words'...well...this would be it...you are lucky to have these feelings in your soul and the gift with which to write them......thank you for sharing it

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-04-08 05:36 PM

So beautiful, as is your love!
It is true that those three words, even though they can be a sacred declaration, we always feel there is more to it than we can express.
Love, Margherita

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-04-08 06:50 PM

thank you

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

4 posted 2003-04-08 08:18 PM

I have always said this

- for it is a verb -

good write - look forward to more

"love is a verb" by D.C. talk - lol

. . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . .

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-04-09 03:21 AM

Brad - Oh My - this is lovely - so versatile and always always leaving me wondering just what I will find . . . xxoo

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-04-09 12:58 PM

Thank you

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-04-10 08:36 AM

Very nice sentiment.

Susan

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2003-04-10 10:13 AM

so glad to read this...

regards,
sudhir

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

9 posted 2003-04-10 12:45 PM

A wonderful read

Andrew

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2003-04-10 12:59 PM

Well done Brad...they may be just three simple words..but they are packed with emotion, commitment and promise..

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-04-10 05:56 PM

Well said...not necessarily the words but the feelings and actions that go with them if the words are sincere...james

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

12 posted 2003-04-10 06:06 PM

Wonderfully written.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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