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Thomas119gold
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-04-08 02:01 PM


I float alone
in a black sea
cold and shivering
until the dark skies break away
to the shining rays of light

Our incandescence hearts
call to each other
with subtle sparks
saying this to all

You are that sunrise
I stay awake to see
the first touch of golden sun
I so anxiously need

The gloom is washed down the shore
Forever more
when you dare to be near

all that I can see brightens
for the light you bring
warms me from the dark sleep
I have been in
and I know my fate is not to be feared
for love draws close to me

Storms will no longer toss me
in this forbidden abyss
for your love has reeled me in
and the radiance you show
tells me I am almost home

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (04-08-2003 02:03 PM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-04-08 02:24 PM


Well done!
Margherita
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2 posted 2003-04-08 04:37 PM


Beautiful! Yes such radiance ... brings Home closer.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-04-09 02:58 AM


Thomas - I love your writing and THIS is one of the best - good luck my friend . . . xxoo
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-09 10:23 AM


...and home is a very nice place to be.  
I enjoyed this reading experience very much!

Love & Light,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-09-2003 10:23 AM).]

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-04-09 10:31 AM


Thomas, I finally feel at "home", too.
I really like this.
Hugs,
Ethel

edh
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since 2003-03-26
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6 posted 2003-04-09 10:49 AM


To of us chasing paper.  Getting nowhere.
On our way back home.
We're on our way home.  We're on our way home.  We're going home.

You and I have memories.  Longer than the
road that stretches on ahead.  

Justbleu
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7 posted 2003-04-09 11:51 AM


I really enjoyed this.....I love lighthouses!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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