»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #25
»
The Replacement
| Open Poetry #25 |
|
The Replacement |
|
|
Adonis Cross Junior Member
since 2003-04-07
Posts 46Miami, FL, USA |
In Spring we had our love affair, Harmonious and splendid; By Summer it was hardly there, And Autumn saw it ended. I know she found another man, More passionate and tender, And where I ended, he began With scintillating splendor. I know the sweeping verse he writes Makes mine seem dull and shoddy, And every word she reads ignites A flame within her body. I know whatever way I claim To be an awesome lover, He'll more than likely be the same, And more than ten times over. It's true he's all I hope to be, So I won't raise an eyelid When hearing later on that he Rejected her, as I did. |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Adonis Cross - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ouch !!! |
||
|
Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Makes one wonder if she ever truly loved either. Perhaps they were merely...pawns. Enjoyed.  Sunkissed.[This message has been edited by Sunkissed (04-08-2003 10:32 AM).] |
||
Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well done! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
