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vandana
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0 posted 2003-04-08 09:36 AM



You're taking the best of me
You are my morning's whisper
That shown In your eyes
You are my heartbeat
Is still believe
That morning will bring
All the light I receive
Morning whisper
You are always mystery to me
Searching for love
Searching for morning's light
You whisper slowly
On my ear
Whisper like a morning dawn
like a candle burns
Flames fading
to the morning's whispers
It is your turn
To break my heart again
And leave me
With the flames fading
slowly
to the morning's whisper
Tomorrow has come to
Filled my heart
With a sorrow
Morning 's whisper......

[This message has been edited by vandana (04-09-2003 08:40 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-08 09:37 AM



Congratulations on your 5,000th post, Vandana...you always leave a smile, and you always share your heart!

          Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-08 09:50 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Yay!!! Congratulations on 5000 wonderful posts, dearest friend, you are a very special friend to me and to so many here and know soon through the morning all your dreams will come true, I send many comforting angel hugs your way and cheers for 5000, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-04-08 10:21 AM


         

CONGRATULATIONS
ON 5000 POSTS


Vandana, this is a really pretty poem
for your 5000th post. Thank you for
sharing your poems with us, and also
for all your replies you give to me
on my poems. I really appreciate you.

Heart Hugs,

Ethel

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4 posted 2003-04-08 12:39 PM




CONGRATULATIONS Vandana!!
5000 Wonderful Poems and Replies!
~Smiles, Hugs, & Cheers, Nancy~


regards2you
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5 posted 2003-04-08 12:55 PM





~Wow! Congratulations!~

This poem quite heart touching. Love the title.

Thank you for always taking the time to read and reply.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-04-08 02:01 PM


Whisper like a morning dawn
like a candle burns
Flames fading
to the morning's whispers

==========================

this is soooo lovely Vandana...
a bittersweet beauty you have penned for your milestone...
Congrats on 5000!!
Well done!!

Mysteria
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7 posted 2003-04-08 02:21 PM



on your 5,000th posting Vandana.  You have written a very beautiful poem with such mixed emotions.  I love how your writing has only gotten better and better in the time since I came to Passions, and it is such fun to watch us all grow.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-04-08 03:54 PM


Enjoyed Vandana...James
morefiah
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9 posted 2003-04-08 04:03 PM


Wonderfully written.... and congratulations on your 5000th.
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-04-08 04:13 PM


My goodness! You really racked up a lot of posts! Congratulations! Thank you for opening up your heart to your readers...


Smiles across the miles,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-08-2003 04:14 PM).]

Patricia
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11 posted 2003-04-08 04:27 PM


On this cold and rainy day, your poem has warmed my heart.  Thank you!  As a newbie to Passions, 5000 posts seem so far away, but I will get there.  I so enjoy being a part of something so special.

-Patricia

Margherita
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12 posted 2003-04-08 05:05 PM


Congratulations for your 5000th post! How much beauty and love you have shared!

And I love very much your "Morning's Whisper" ... it's Spring time, your hearts will dance anew in joy.
Love, Margherita

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