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The Future I Recall - Again :-)
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The Future I Recall - Again :-) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*The Future I Recall*~  Sweet memories drift back to me A smile crosses lips I recollect a time when you were at my fingertips Once upon a romance when we danced 'neath lover's moon When every word in whispered breath would cause my heart to swoon A hug, a kiss...sweet reminisce It seems like yesterday When you were here beside me loving me your gentle way And, now I long to hear your voice Sweet music to my ears To know once more the sound of you after oh so many years Thinking back to hearts entwined How quickly I could fall Can't help but wonder is it 'past' or 'future' I recall ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-08-2003 05:38 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"Thinking back to hearts entwined How quickly I could fall Can't help but wonder is it 'past' or 'future' I recall" Often been caught in this swirl, myself. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Vicky, This is so well written. I enjoy your poetry. Would also quote the last stanza and title.... Very touching, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HelloSweetPoetess~ One of my favorites of your heart-writes~ Looking toward the future~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I think it's a little of both, it would have to be if such a love is real! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make my heart smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very pretty piece |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Is it past or future I recall. The final(?) line speaks the now of the heart miss vicky... hugs... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah yes..very appropriate post for the day...  happiness to you my friend!! hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Very touching and captivating |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh gosh, this is so beautiful, you're a very romantic lady Vicky. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Makes me wanna cry. It's so touching it remiinds me why we take the risks of love. It's a beautiful poem |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...just gotta echo my friend Marge...and also give you a  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Vicky - know this feeling well . . . wish you didnt . . . nice write here xxoo |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Excellent choice for posting, vlr - Intertwining our past with our future, and finding some happiness... life is good... and getting better all the time... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My says  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing, I really enjoyed the read Andrew |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
MUM!!! Beautiful!! *grins and dances* I feel the need to aww lol. *BIG HUGS*  Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vicky, the last two lines are especially poignant...and thoughtful...you know how I love thinking that some of us are able to know the presence of tomorrow from our yesterdays... well done, my friend.... |
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