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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-04-07 10:52 PM

She comes to me at eventide,
Across the sky in gloam's bestride,
On noiseless feet, a beauty rare,
Upon night's breeze, to me ensnare
Within her charms, muse Terpsichore,
To dance as one to distant shore,
Lovelier than twinkling stars,
With passions deep as fair Ishtars
A mortal I in love's embrace,
Within the arms of heaven's grace,
I taste the sweetness of her kiss,
And touch the moon within love's bliss.
She comes to me at vespertine,
Encapturing me in love's entwine.

[This message has been edited by Tim (04-07-2003 10:56 PM).]

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2003-04-07 11:39 PM

Hello Tim

This was absolutely stunning.

"Love - bittersweet,
irrepressible -
loosens the limbs
and I tremble."

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-04-08 05:59 AM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-04-08 07:02 AM

I do so enjoy
reading your ponderings...
thank you, Sir....

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

4 posted 2003-04-08 07:22 AM

Beautifully written.

Sunkissed.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-04-08 07:34 AM

This is a very beautiful song .... touched by Tersichore's charms ...
Quite special write.
Love, Margherita

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-04-08 08:17 AM

There ya go again... Romance & eventide - You know I love every word of it...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-04-08 08:29 AM

Tim
Well written, enjoyed.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-04-08 10:58 AM

Very beautiful. Reads so smoothly.

Enjoyed greatly. Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2003-04-08 07:53 PM

Tim~
Ahhhhhhhhh .... such beauty in your pen !
This is enchantingly lovely~
I so appreciate getting to read you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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