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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-04-07 06:30 PM

Because I Can

you dip into
the deepest edges
of tender
to touch
a heart
where I
have seen
the center
and placed walls
around the rest
yet, you bridge
a change
in me and
I love you
because I can

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

1 posted 2003-04-07 06:50 PM

The special chemistry that "one certain person" is the greatest gift of love. You've phrased it very well. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2003-04-07 06:57 PM

enjoyed

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-04-07 07:15 PM

wow Helen, this is perfect. I wish I had written it, well I think I have many times, just not in so few words.

~smiles
M

SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

4 posted 2003-04-07 07:36 PM

That was definately a feeling that I have felt before. I love how you arranged the words. Beautiful work.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-04-07 09:10 PM

You can...for you cannot do otherwise.
Love is who you are...and it shows in your every word.
Eric

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-04-07 09:17 PM

helen - you write to someone special...

BC

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

7 posted 2003-04-07 10:43 PM

I love you
because I can

What better reason????
Great write.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2003-04-08 04:06 AM

Helen~
This is simply beautiful.
I love it...because I can.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

9 posted 2003-04-08 04:13 AM

wow those last 2 lines really got me! awesome awesome awesome!!!
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-04-08 04:49 AM

makes me happy

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