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Open Poetry #25

Fall

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2003-04-07 01:34 PM

I know this is a bit out of season, but it's a work in progress that's suffered several revisions. What do you think?

Long, hot days of summer
draw nearer to an end
as the harvest moon shines down
and autumn’s flights begin.

Cool October winds
breathe upon a land
of brilliant forest colors
painted by a magic hand.

Fields lie stark and barren
where season’s crops are done,
but days are far from lazy
when winter's sure to come.

Across the hillside echos
haunting, lonesome calls
as the wolf song serenades
the coming of the fall.

[This message has been edited by Edder (04-07-2003 02:05 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-04-07 01:56 PM

Edder~

Your imagery is excellent~

Welcome to Passions' circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

2 posted 2003-04-07 02:07 PM

Thank you Marge. Your kindness is greatly appreciated.

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