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CSKpoet
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0 posted 2003-04-06 01:41 AM




Highly esteem our red, white and blue.
Let her blow in the wind for the world to see
Remember her value to me and to you
For the home of the brave and land of the free

Let her blow in the wind for the world to see
Honor our vets who fought through war’s hell
For the home of the brave and land of the free
Many men paid with blood so she would prevail.

Honor our vets who fought through war’s hell
Take your place in the battle, lifting voices in prayer
Many men paid with blood so she would prevail
Stand united, America and show that you care.

Take your place in the battle, lifting voices in prayer
Remember her value to me and to you
Stand united, America and show that you care
Highly esteem our red, white and blue!


Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (04-06-2003 03:01 AM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-04-06 01:53 AM


Oh Cheryl,
I love this. I love the flag and I'm so proud of our men and women in the military. I'm also Proud To Be An American!!!!

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
2 posted 2003-04-06 03:00 AM


Me too Ethel...and thanks for your sweet encouraging comments

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2003-04-06 05:14 AM


Well Done! Wish I could write one.

enjoyed

Maree.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-04-06 05:19 AM


Amen!
Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2003-04-06 12:34 PM


Absolutely! I love pantoums, this one is well done, and I enthusiastically agree with the sentiment.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
6 posted 2003-04-07 02:53 AM


Thank you to all..I am firmly in a patriotic mode as people I love are busy freeing suppressed peeople from a very evil and cruel man...We need to support them and our country.
aloha and hugs to all, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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