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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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On those nights that I might dream I sleep behind a pane of glass no thing to block the sun from me-- I love to wake held by my sky. I used to have lace panel sheers-- illusion of romance. The patterns of the weave of tears made puppets of belief of chance. Now I just drape cotton sheet-- a shroud of linen's disbelief. I wake, now, to dappling-- knowing that my love is there. The mares of night hang head in shame, submissive in this dance of hawk. I watch the two encircling diving in transparency-- clouds will break in safe passage... my love, my love I'm not forsaked. I pull the sheets and feel him shine... How is it that this is for me? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you Julie.... just a little something for a special wake up call. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Because sometimes you really do get what you deserve... even if it takes a long time getting there. *S* I like this very much... and the title is irresistible! *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most special wake up call... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
How is it that this is for me? Ever heard the saying, you get what you deserve. You deserve the world after all these years K |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
dappled face how is it? smile....this is a treasure that will be |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
agreeing with Aenimal |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
On those nights that I might dream I sleep behind a pane of glass no thing to block the sun from me-- I love to wake held by my sky. I used to have lace panel sheers-- illusion of romance. The patterns of the weave of tears made puppets of belief of chance. Now I just drape cotton sheet-- a shroud of linen's disbelief. I wake, now, to dappling-- knowing that my love is there. ================================= LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( and the poet)   " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The mares of night hang head in shame, submissive in this dance of hawk. I watch the two encircling diving in transparency-- Oh Karen you do squeeze words and feelings for all they are worth and you didn't even put this winner into Reflections? Fantastic!  ~* Carpe' Diem *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-20-2003 08:44 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karen, I would choose this kind of wake-up call over the traditional loud alarm clock beep any morning! (big huggssssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
....I love to wake held by my sky... Karen, please, add this to the reflections on the web, for the book. ???!!!!! You've outshone yourself here lady, i am wowed. keeping this lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really like this one, Karen. It's absolutely beautiful...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow....you guys? are so good to me and FOR me... I bring my self to this pc, all droopy in spirit, and it's like a well of healing here. geez...I'm gonna cry again. *shaking my head* must be hormones, huh? Thank you all. |
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