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Breathe For Me
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Breathe For Me |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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NOTE: This is an extreme poem. I am giving fair warning that is contains glimpses of reality in the form of suicide. Side note: This is not how I FEEL. It is just a piece I had the urge to write and share. I'm ready to run, take away my mind. I'm ready to die now, is life worth living. Now how do I begin, to say goodbye? I'm ready to run, away now. To free myself from pain, I'm ready to die now, is life worth living? Now how do I begin, to say goodbye. I'm ready to run, it only hurts when I breathe. I'm ready to run, away from this shelter, to free myself from pain. All I really want, is to cry now. This pain it won't go away. All I really want, is to be at ease. All I really want, is to cry now. Here I am now, hiding behind a fake smile, Here I am now, and it still only hurts when I breathe. But I'm not ready to die now. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I have felt like this. Your poem feels familiar, it recalls the times when I am struggling to get out of dark tunnels. A very powerful poem! Thanks to God you do not allow the one who feels like this to actually go ahead with his purpose. There is always hope to be found, some sparkles of it at least. Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Yes...very powerful. Eric |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I felt the pain in my soul. My heart is full of tears. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I need to breathe for myself. I think this was a huge learning experience. |
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