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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Cycling Each day I wait for night to come; in dark, I have no face. Each night I pray for time to pass, to touch the light's embrace. A cycle it has come to be for never does it seem, to let the moment's offerings be more or less the dream. Each day I wonder, even though I wake to sun's warm glow, why all around me birds are singing rain or dry or snow. Each night I hear the quietness of world in sleeping's hold, and yet it's then that channels me in wondering's unfold. Cycling, the years have passed and still my breath is seen. Some day when right, the time will end, this stage of in between. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear M, the second sad one in one day! But it is also so beautifully written .... and there is hope. May you hear the night's whispers of beauty. Your yearning for the light's embrace is deeply felt. Hugs. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am just hoping for this "in between" limbo life of mine to someday move forward. *s Thank you Margherita for all your kind words hugss M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The in - between, is where we grow. As the zen masters say...it is the space between the bars, that keep the tiger in. (or the silence between notes...that makes the song) From the in between...your words have sprung. And you have shared beautifuly. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful write..... I know to well how your feeling... maybe we don't share the same topic (I don't know) but the need to move forward... I love the responce from Ericc |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so sad! Very nicely done, good images and good meter. But so sad! I don't want you sad. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is sad, but in between is something we all know. May your in betweens be filled with sunshine spilled randomly and effusively. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yes Maureen~ someday it will come to an end for you and me both, this time that lags in between. Hold onto that thought! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stuck in between...geez, you said it so well |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ericc well if that is where we grow it might explain the expansion of my waistline  hugss M Thank you Connie (where have you been hiding) I love Ericc's response, too. Nan, oh I bounce between sad and happy ...that is the in between of it. Hope you are well. Kethry, how sweet. Many hugss. I am looking forward to the sunshine..after the rain. BluesSerenade, I know. I am almost losing my patience and am tired of waiting for that corner to turn. *s hugss M Dixie, I am beginning to wonder if you ever sleep hugss and thanks M |
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