Open Poetry #25 |
Magnolia Bend |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Magnolia Bend By: Noah Eaton 11/20/01 Weeping willows welter in the tangerine rain Lifting their flowering bangs to a spectrum hurricane Belly-dancing to the reggae cypress briars Rattling pineapple tiaras against the daybreak lyre Down beneath where the swan and dolphin bathe A shy mellow magnolia bend hosts Mother Nature’s menagerie Orchids cradle their children, sipping a waft of the morning’s green tea Whilst the crape myrtles father her offspring Sherbet shadows drip from a citrus sky Where the morning glories answer to Dawn’s melismatic cry Orange groves ripe to the freshness of the season Harmony balancing what we see to our imagination Here I pull up the covers and rest in Her concinnity Watching the pale sky break in serenity Gazing into the eye of a magnolia, kissed by a honeybee As my hair caresses across my face, daydreaming under my palm tree… "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-05-2003 04:52 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - I loved this: As my hair caresses across my face, daydreaming under my palm tree… reminds me of Kauai - you brought me back there for a sec - thank you . . . xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What beauty! Just today I admired the very tall and magnificent magnolia tree we have near our house. You weaved magical words and created a wondrous atmosphere here. Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow Noah...this is awe-some! Eric |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah Noah....your poems still hold a vibrancy of color that is stunning. Beautiful. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - my dear friend, you have blended words and photos perfectly in this write. And you know I love magnolia's. I wonder how you knew... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, What a beautiful combination of floral pics and colourful writing!! big hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This reminded me of growing up in GA...what a beautiful canvas...thank you... Lauren~ Through the darkness |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A tropical delight! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Noah, this poem is so pretty, and the pictures match it too. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I have been daydreaming under palm trees and slacking...but I did adore the sweet read here, noah and your wonderful uplifting style and presentation... I have been into my painting and creativity has drawn me thetre more than the write at the moment. But I do sneak back here to view my buddy's poems when i can. I am sure glad that i did today..I have missed you! big hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Noah, my friend, Thas is SOOOOO beautiful. I love Magnolias. There are two trees of them over at my house in the country. They are so pretty. And the pictures here of all the flowers are simply beautiful. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely views and exquisite visions within your words. Love your descriptive words so very much! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Exquisite - it is always quite exciting to look in on your posts - always a pleasure. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
You had to be a southern person in a former life.I have always thought of magnolias as being tree sized bouquets. paladin |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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