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molly_the_dolly
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since 2003-02-12
Posts 25
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-02-18 10:55 PM


As I sit in the window,
time seems to fly.
Lately its like the worlds
passing me by.

Which way to turn,
which decision to choose.
Everything is riding,
I don't want to lose.

I go through the motions,
and put on a brave face.
Inside I'm mixed up,
a real basket case.

Not quite an adult,
but still not a child.
I just want to break out,
and do somthing wild

Travel the world,
or swim in the sea.
Do somthing fun,
and do it only for me.

[This message has been edited by molly_the_dolly (02-18-2003 11:06 PM).]

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-18 10:56 PM


I really like this piece a lot.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Amature2
Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416

2 posted 2003-02-18 11:01 PM


molly, the last line says it all,
"Do something fun,
and do it only for me."

Very nice.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-02-20 04:39 AM


yep!
Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-08-10 02:07 AM


Thank you very much
molly

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