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Merry Go Round
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Merry Go Round |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Merry Go Round I have gone around and round On a merry go round. On a wooden horse of force But know not of its course. Up and down it goes in stride The senses feel the ride. Like a child you make believe The end you can’t conceive. The ride itself full of thrills Each turn is full of spills You guide yourself by a star Gone the feeling of bourgeois. Taken up in the passion Each time has its fashion And all the past is your host All heady drink a heady boast And you grab for the brass ring Like winters last and wished for spring. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I have always believed that life is just like a merry-go-round, with it's ups and downs, and when you go down, you somehow know that there will be another up!! Loved this Sy, it makes me young again!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone Thank you dear, glad you liked. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Digging out my pics of Martha's Vineyard to see if I got any with Sy and the Flying Horses...  [This message has been edited by Nan (04-05-2003 08:14 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan Hi sweetie when are you comming down, we miss you.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - love the images here, as I always wanted to go on the Merry Go Round first when we went to the fair. Now it seems, my whole life has been an up and down ride...not always of joy....but interesting even so. Grab the brass ring for me will you? I'm just too darned short..lol. Where is my sister with the tea. We'll have to start our cinnamon rolls without her! hugs to you dear gentle man. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Sy oh Sy...I've brass rings, two! One for me, and one for you! On this merry gone round I'll sing with you... here within these pages blue!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Cinnamon rolls sounds good to me, Sunshine, I'd grab the brass ring with you any day. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sybabes...you are the brass ring!!! and me *winkies* King *L* I've no need of wooden horses in round ride ... Not when I have Randy to fly me to your tides.  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Seymour, what a delightful read And all the past is your host ~liked the way you put it And you grab for the brass ring Like winters last and wished for spring. ~a tinge of sadness implied, which makes the poem like fine wine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Then winkiewinkie to you and I'll be over on Randy with the brandy. WWRS kaile Wonderful comment and I thank you so much. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) I feel like my whole early life was all down all the time and so I now believe that it's all up from here with only times when I;m going straight fending off some worries coming! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love this analogy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always enjoy your comments. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm late..I'm late...but, finally I'm here!! Loved this carousel ride Sy! Sorry I wasn't here this morn to see this beauty. I know!! I shall make the tea tonight so it will be ready for Sunday morn. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the responses are as much fun to read as are your poems..*s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Enjoyed your comment, |
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