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lost_star
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0 posted 2003-04-05 01:51 AM


I find peace knowing we look at the same moon every night,
even though we are so far apart,
I often wonder if you talk to the moon like I do?

I dream of the moment you come back to me,
to finally have you back in my arms,
How much longer do I have to wait for you?

I wish you could see whats going on over here,
everyone is so proud of you,
especially me...
everyone is waiting for your return,
especially me...

I hope your okay where you are,
I wish I could see your face right now,
I need to hear your voice tell me your safe,
But I can't hear you?

For now I have memories and hope,
Memories of our special days together,
and hope that you will come back to me soon.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-04-05 02:34 AM


hope is what keeps us going...this is so sad to have to be apart...
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2 posted 2003-04-05 02:34 AM


What an absolutely sweet poem. I'm going to look for more from you. I'm feeling the same feeling right now, though for very different reasons, and this really moved me.

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lost_star
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3 posted 2003-04-05 03:44 AM


Thank you very much for your replys. I hope we all get our loved ones back very soon!
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-04-05 07:17 AM


Take memories, add hope, and mix well with prayers...your special one will come home to you!!  This is a beautiful and hopeful piece for all those who are waiting...thank you for sharing it with us, my friend!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-04-05 02:57 PM



I'm so glad
I'm not alone
in talking
to the moon...



Very nice!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

lost_star
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6 posted 2003-04-06 03:19 AM


Thank you for your replys
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