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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-04-04 05:40 PM

Obviously

I like you.
so I'll try to
tell you why.

Perhaps a good reason why
is when I look into your eyes
I feel soothed as if angels are
singing me sweet lullaby's.

It could have something to do
with placement and time and
at this moment your voice and
your body seem perfectly aligned.

It could be because your personality
pleases me beyond comprehension.
Maybe your so beautiful that I
desire all your love and attention.

All of these thoughts make
perfect sense to me.
I'm smitten by you.
Obviously.

JamesLee
April04
2003

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved

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Gaia

1 posted 2003-04-04 06:11 PM

obviously

smiling here, our James has been smitten

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-04-04 09:31 PM

One of your more insightful poems, James...

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

3 posted 2003-04-04 11:07 PM

....and obviously I really like this James. Your writing is always soft to read. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2003-04-05 12:56 PM

one of your best James...enjoyed

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

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MA, USA

5 posted 2003-04-05 02:35 PM

James...Obviously...you were smitten. This is a very romantic poem and a bold declaration of your feelings.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

6 posted 2003-04-05 03:59 PM

Obviously she has caught your attention .... now wait, the feelings you sent out will bounce back at ya!
Love this!
Margherita

Startime55
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Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2003-04-05 04:01 PM

BRAVO!!! Obviously you are very deserving of the feelings that will be returned to you...Well done.

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-04-05 05:13 PM

Very sweet and tender!
Eric

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9 posted 2003-04-05 05:54 PM

enjoyed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-04-05 07:15 PM

Very much enjoyed this one James.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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