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A step or two behind ...(repost from open 16)
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A step or two behind ...(repost from open 16) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Perhaps a step or two behind is where I felt the curve of you tugging at me like a small powerful boat tossed by the sea if I could steal a dreaming moment shape it to curl over me stronger than a passing wave I would I’d swim you and feel the whirl of you behind it all Dark Angel 30th October 2001 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm not sure why I feel a lump in my throat, and I'm sure this wet on my cheek is just the spray from the sea... my goodness, this touched me deep.... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
"I'd swim you" just form that line alone there are amazing images... and looked at all the rest? wow! brilliant lines me thinks. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is truly lovely, in thought and one I shall read many times, as it has such beautiful meaning....  Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
exceptional work... regards, sudhir |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful write Maree thanks for the repost!! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Heart touching...that had my heart feeling...wonderful writing... |
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