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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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MA, USA

0 posted 2003-04-04 12:33 PM



Tomorrow
or the next day...

I'll be where forever
~~~has no meaning.

I'll find you
in the unwavering,
translucent blue
between dreams and reality,
in the hopeful joy
of faith and assurance.

I'll search for...
just one moment of joy,
one moment of love to share
with you...when we meet, at last.
I'll never give up
on finding you.No, not ever.

For you are my promise,
my one consolation.
You drift slowly by
on the wings of
eternal beauty, on the stars
of brightest wonderment.

Tomorrow
or the next day...

I will be further into forever.
The meaning will be clear

to the hearts of you and I.

© Copyright 2003 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2003-04-04 12:36 PM


IR,
Awww...take me there! Here's my vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
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caddyshack
2 posted 2003-04-04 12:49 PM


For you are my promise,
my one consolation.
You drift slowly by
on the wings of
eternal beauty, on the stars
of brightest wonderment

amazing write - loved this part

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-04-04 04:31 AM


Rose - this is lovely - it just touched me so - got my vote - you did . . .  xxoo
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-04 09:06 AM


Ivy Rose, a poem such as this, is one of the reasons for my wanting to see you posting more often!  

Love & Light,
Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2003-04-04 09:21 AM


Very intense! You have my vote. ..... and I love your trust. Wonderful.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-04-05 05:19 AM


Enjoyed...James
Sunnyone
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7 posted 2003-04-05 06:52 AM


This is wonderful, and I love the thoughts you've put into words so very well!!!  It's got my vote for certain!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-04-05 07:11 PM




(smiles) Oh Ivy, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and each day may your heart continue to soar deeper into the colors of forever and discover something new each day, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-04-05 07:13 PM


So very beautiful...gets my vote.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
10 posted 2003-04-05 07:15 PM


Forever lives eternally in our dreams and I am here to say that dreams do indeed become realities....Wait for the next day and joy will fill your forevers....hugs
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2003-04-05 07:31 PM


Ivy Rose - such writing as this needs a spot in the book. Nice write of searching for someone...

BC

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-04-06 02:48 PM


This is a beautiful poem.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
13 posted 2003-04-06 03:24 PM


lovely thoughts

M

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2003-04-11 01:32 PM


IvyRose~
Skipping through some back pages ... I found this beauty~

'Tomorrow
or the next day...

I will be further into forever'


I'm so glad I did~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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