Open Poetry #25 |
The Next Day Of Forever |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Tomorrow or the next day... I'll be where forever ~~~has no meaning. I'll find you in the unwavering, translucent blue between dreams and reality, in the hopeful joy of faith and assurance. I'll search for... just one moment of joy, one moment of love to share with you...when we meet, at last. I'll never give up on finding you.No, not ever. For you are my promise, my one consolation. You drift slowly by on the wings of eternal beauty, on the stars of brightest wonderment. Tomorrow or the next day... I will be further into forever. The meaning will be clear to the hearts of you and I. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
IR, Awww...take me there! Here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
For you are my promise, my one consolation. You drift slowly by on the wings of eternal beauty, on the stars of brightest wonderment amazing write - loved this part |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rose - this is lovely - it just touched me so - got my vote - you did . . . xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivy Rose, a poem such as this, is one of the reasons for my wanting to see you posting more often! Love & Light, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very intense! You have my vote. ..... and I love your trust. Wonderful. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is wonderful, and I love the thoughts you've put into words so very well!!! It's got my vote for certain!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ivy, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and each day may your heart continue to soar deeper into the colors of forever and discover something new each day, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful...gets my vote. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Forever lives eternally in our dreams and I am here to say that dreams do indeed become realities....Wait for the next day and joy will fill your forevers....hugs |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - such writing as this needs a spot in the book. Nice write of searching for someone... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely thoughts M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ Skipping through some back pages ... I found this beauty~ 'Tomorrow or the next day... I will be further into forever' I'm so glad I did~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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