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Open Poetry #25

An average day

JP
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

0 posted 2003-04-03 04:42 PM

Average day today
Careening thoughts assailing
Riddled dreams derailing
Overt desires compelling
Silent panics assaulting
Tantric needs defaulting
Intricate defeats exaulting
Creating an average day today

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-04-03 04:44 PM

Acrostically right!

Get your behind into Poetry Workshop...we could use you!

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

2 posted 2003-04-03 04:46 PM

I don't know... me and 'work' don't get along too well.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-04-03 05:48 PM

well done!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2003-04-03 05:58 PM

JP...Your average day ....wheew! Enjoyable acrostic.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-04-03 06:12 PM

I enjoyed your take on the average day...

*s
M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-03 07:33 PM

Wonderful acrostic JP!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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