Open Poetry #25 |
How It Begins...How It Ends |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
~First there is the courtship. This is the tide playing to the pull of the moon - The wave teasing the shore with a taste of the ocean. This is our taste. And our longing to devour. This is the wait...the courtship of our desire. ~Then comes presence. The moon is full with awareness. Gravity is the weight of love...and the tides grow heavy. The wave crashes fierce to know the shore...and then falls back in a slow caress - memorizing every grain of sand beneath its touch. This is our feast. We come only with our hunger. And we feed to each other the pure presence of this love. ~At last we merge. The ocean lies calm...the moon reflected low across its stillness. The shore is damp with memory...the wave sings in quiet tones the holiness of their meeting. And you and I have tasted the depths of one another. We have fed our flesh...our love...our spirits - Until full of our desires we hunger no more. We are filled only with each other. [This message has been edited by Ericc (04-03-2003 03:44 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I should know better than to read you in the middle of the day... now I'm not going to get ANYTHING done.... sigh. Dang. Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
laughing at Karilea..*s nicely done Ericc M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric..one of your longer ones.. and I love it!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Merging ... the ultimate goal of every love. What a wonderful path you have designed, magical steps leading into the depth of each other. Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc - what a beautiful love story . . . I loved this! xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-06-2003 06:08 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! awesome write! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!Your words take the heart and float away with it into a life of true beginnings...MAGNIFICENT!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ericc, Ericc, Ericc....Ooooh, Ericc! This is now one of my favorite poems on loving... Compelling reading!--truuuuuuuuly! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Popping back in to say that I would like to give this poem a loving home in my personal library... Warm hugs, EA |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Thank you Linda (thank you everyone!!) Linda, This poem was inspired in part by the Kabbalah and in part by Tantric philosophy. The courtship of the Divine...the Infinite flirting with us through everyday life. Aahhhh....life's pretty cool huh?! Love, Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this too |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hmm. Tantric. Yes, much more rewarding than tantrums. What a sensually delightful poem. Another tasty treat for my private library. |
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