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My Puppet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Puppet Inside a bottle I reside. And some would say in there I hide. I dwell within this phantoms plight And live a life within this light. It pleases me no end to be. To sail upon this vital sea To be the kings in kingdoms come. To be the sward and not the plum I revel in the freedom of. The hero in the game of love I am the knight upon the quest. And always stand above the rest. Would this not elate you too? To be the best at all you do. There is no payment for the bail. You conjure up a ship and sail. And though it reads a nitric gas. I love this bottle and its glass. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To be the kings in kingdoms come. To be the sward and not the plum ============================== and those will be my waaaaay cool lines of the day!!! Oh my poet prophet ... a plum you could never be ... for you see you are the rarest of the rhyme raspberry.  *winkiewinkie*   "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your raspberry has showered me I thought we were to drink the tea? LOL WWRS |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What JM said! Those are my favourite lines as well Sy! Raspberry tea from Janet and blueberry from moi? I do hope you enjoy tea Sy!  Thank you for this beautiful morning awakening. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A bottled puppet...you've got to adore the imagery...and the fact that your rapier wit leaves us full plums for breakfast! Always always a breath of fresh air.... good morning, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you my friend. Nancy, Love tea, Sunshine A rapier answer, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your glass has a lot of class... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan For a moment I thought you said gass? LOL |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, not sure what to say, but I like how you closed this one...bringing us back to the glass in such a simplisticly clever way. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Can I borrow some of your imagination? Wonderful write dear sir. I offer you mixed fruit muffins to go along with your delightful teas to-day. hugs to you on this Thursday morn, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you thought Nan said gass I almost read it thatway nicely wrote as always M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Enjoyed your comment, thank you. Chris, I think I've gained a couple of pounds, LOL Hugs. Maureen, The devil make you say that too, LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....Wonderful ride on your words this morning...I only have an egg to offer and coffee....Over easy? (no, not the coffee, the egg)  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Seymour  I guess the devil made me say it, too, then. LOL I thought the same thing.  I really do like your "puppet in a bottle" inspiration, friend.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Greetings, Mr. T. ! You and your bottle may bob up and down on my waters whenever you please!---I have that lovely lake that I was telling you about, just outside my door... tehe Hugs & stuff, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Eges over light would be fine. LOL Everyone wants to feed me, I wonder why? Ethel, The devil has been busy this morning, LOL Earth Angel To see an angel, I'd come any time, LOL Been to canada many times lovely country. |
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