Open Poetry #25 |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981![]() |
Blood is thicker Than pouring rain But a drop of each Causes equal pain Fish can swim, And birds can fly See yourself in the water, Or yourself in the sky As a river is long, And an ocean wide, For everything, There’s a reason for pride There’s light in the dark, And dark in the light, Some see black, And some see white But everything is one in the same, It depends on how you play the game the Wind is invisible. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You written a cool poem here Liz. Fun and gently pointed. [This message has been edited by Duncan (02-18-2003 08:43 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice to see you writing again Wind |
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Fauxreal Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 38 |
beautiful poem. you remind me of myself. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It is so nice to be graced by the Wind today! Missed you! You have such depth to your writing. I have enjoyed every single one of your poems that I have read to date!--and this one is no exception! Warm hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very neat! i always enjoy your writings! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wind~ A lyrical piece ... loaded with message~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, this is so deeply touching, sweet friend, everything is contradictory in its own way and method and there is an opposite that can attrack nonetheless! (sigh) This is wonderful writing, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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