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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-04-02 07:26 AM


Trespass

There are times when the wind blows.
And I am cold.
There are times when the sky glows.
And I am old.

There are times when my heart cries.
And I am bleary.
There are times when my soul sighs.
And I am weary.

Trespassing caverns of the mind
Is to feel the night.
Nonaligned in the dark and blind
Is to loose your sight.

I walk these shadows every day.
Ever filled with awe.
I tread the treadmill of my way.
Unsure of the store

I ride the boundaries of my soul.
In search an arbitrary goal.

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-04-02 07:49 AM


You ride the boundaries of your soul beautifully ..... and the shadows have the merit to make you stand in awe for what they define ...
Love, Margherita

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-04-02 08:01 AM


Trespassing caverns of the mind
Is to feel the night.
Nonaligned in the dark and blind
Is to loose your sight.

==========================

There are times when your rhymes blow my mind,
the above lines will serve to remind and define.
Your wisdom eyes of wise give the rest of us sight ...
your humanity and humility allow us to warm in your light.

Consider yourself our poetic sun ...
write your rhymes when day is done.




"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


Spiros Zafiris
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3 posted 2003-04-02 08:18 AM


..Seymour Tabin../\.. i enjoy reading your poems..but i guess i've told you before..very nice..

../\..Spiros

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-04-02 08:29 AM


Sy, I enjoy my mornings so much more with you in them.
You are a very talented writer..
always incorporating a lesson in life and love.
Tea's on!  
~Morning hugs, Nancy~


~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~


[This message has been edited by Enchantress (04-02-2003 10:45 AM).]

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-04-02 09:08 AM


Bless you our Sy...sometimes I feel that
you leave go of any boundary that might
inhibit you, and take us for universal
flights of both fancy...AND reality...

HUGS...

Nightshade
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just out of reach
6 posted 2003-04-02 09:39 AM


Ahh dear Seymour, I wish I could reach through the computer and hug you. Your morning poems start me on my way with thoughts to ponder - always. Cinnamon toast is ready!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-04-02 09:49 AM


Mr. T. ~

You can come on up to Ontario and "trespass" on my property if ever you should desire to do so! I live on the shores of a lake, and it is simply beautiful here!

It appears to me that you must "be aligned in the dark and blind", for you have most definitely not lost your 'sigh't !

Warm, morning hugs,
EA

regards2you
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8 posted 2003-04-02 09:53 AM




Sy,

You faithfully give to us food for thought. How blessed we are.

Thank you,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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9 posted 2003-04-02 09:59 AM


Superb sounds and flow to this on, Sy!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-04-02 10:20 AM


Margherita
Lovely comment, thank you.

JM,
You do say the nices things and
that's why Randy spreads his wings.
He can't resist your magic awe
And will not stop until there's more.
WWRS

Spiros  
Don't stop, I love it. LOL

Nancy,
Love your morning hugs,

Sunshine
And I love when you come along. Hugs

Chris,
Cinnamon toast would be delicious, Hugs

Earth Angel
There you go again shooting those angelic arrows and you just put one through my heart.

Pat,
No it is I that am blessed with you. Hugs

VAS
I give you a VAS hug and thank you.

Janet Marie
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11 posted 2003-04-02 11:02 AM


More you say????
Darling...the moth specializes in more  *L*

If you got the rhymes...
the moth will make the time.  



one for Randy too  



Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-04-02 11:25 AM


JM,
I'll write the rhyme,
If you got the time.

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-04-02 11:54 AM


SY - always in my head you are:

I tread the treadmill of my way.
Unsure of the store

I know this one well . . . xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
14 posted 2003-04-02 01:23 PM


littlewing
What a nice place to be, thank you.

suthern
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15 posted 2003-04-02 01:30 PM


I walk these shadows every day.
Ever filled with awe.
I tread the treadmill of my way.
Unsure of the store

I ride the boundaries of my soul.
In search an arbitrary goal.

And I'd gladly open every gate for you... for your travels lead us all to greater understanding... and add smiles to life. *S* This is wonderful, Seymour! *S*

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
16 posted 2003-04-02 01:45 PM


Sy, you are such a wonder!

Hugs and smiles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

passing shadows
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displaced
17 posted 2003-04-02 03:02 PM


I journey there too
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-04-02 03:10 PM


suthern
You are the wonderful one.

Marti,
Hugs and smiles back.

passing shadows
I know,

Mistletoe Angel
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19 posted 2003-04-02 11:04 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I feel sometimes we just have to trespass when it feels uneasy and risky just to be acquainted with the tears and find comfort and solace in underastanding them, retribution makes amends! (sigh) This is powerfully aching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-04-03 07:29 AM


Noah,
Thank you my friend.

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